Mmmhhhh.....nice work Silvia, although I wonder if you have made one with a hidden meaning as well, lol.
Eitherway: a lovely little gem:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Sylvia,

This, like the form is delightful. I can clearly see a mouth desperately trying to crack through the red sticky toffee, resulting in its stickiness and colour to be transferred onto adjacent cheeks. An image all too clear and all too memorable from when I last had one. I believe it was when I last went to the fair?

Well done, I want to try this form now.

Take care

Michael

Well after all is said and done i think you pretty much coined both aspects of the form very well, a toffee apple as we call them can be hard work to eat HAHA
it is also a great love for many, so your poem remains true to its form and brought a melancholy smile to my face as well.Thanks

Grant

I dont know what a candy apple is :[ I really want to try one now that i read your poem! They sound really yummy. Especially with everyone elses comments, i think i must be quite deprived!
Really nicely penned, great use of the form too.
5/5

Such delighful poem... :) ...I frlt like tasting the candy apple .. beautifully written making the readers relish the taste of your poem :)