This is a bold effort. You leave things unsaid but clearly suggested, which i love and which 90% of people on this site seem incapable of...not to insult.

Keep it sweet.

Hmm...I liked it, it was alright, not one of my favorite of yours, but it was good. You can use words to create pictures in peoples heads, thats a talent that some people don't have. Keep writing, i'll keep reading.
Luv,

-Blue

Great poem! nice flow, and awesome content....

I might be readingit wrong...but shouldn't the last line read, "My wins WOULDN'T be so special"?