by Cara
I love this form! I havent come across it before, but i really like it. What a clever poem that you have written here.. really well done. I dont even know what to say, it was terrific. Good use of emotions.. it really had me intrigued till the last line. |
by Ingrid
Silvia, |
by kate
One word: |
by Faithless
Wow i like how you penned this down. I think it is an interesting scheme. No doubyt that those are some of the questions that we will be asking when someone we love dies but you have portrayed it beautifully.No doubt that this poem is great but i think you can enhance it more if you were to put a question at the end of each question. But then again tts just my opinion...other than that it was really a delightful to read. |
by Raychil
I loved this poem. And I must admit, I'ver never seen this style before. But I'm welcome to anything new and I'd love to try it. Wonderful piece here. It was so beautiful. I am a question writer as well so I love when others do the same, it really lets the reader see from the writer's side. <3 |