by Deven Feb 10, 2009
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
When u pasted the pack got weaker |
Strangely, I loved it, and I don't say I loved a poem on here often.. The mistery of this peice just had me in till the ending line. You could work on your grammer, but forget that for a second. Your metaphorical view and emotion in this peice is amazing. |