Short, sweet, and to the point. |
by Faithless
Nicely written, though it is short, i like how you cut down on your words only to pen those words that are necessary. The flow of the poem was great too |
by Aaron Martin
Wow.. seems like you're experiencing some trouble with somebody. |
by Saving Grace
I liked it. Like above, the simplicity really works for this poem i think. Its short, and emotional, and i found it wasnt forced, just flowed. I like that. =] Keep it up. 5/5 |