by Sugar Feb 10, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Each day that I see you greet me |
by The Queen
Flows perfectly and ryhmed with ease dindt seem by force. I loved as well how you used some methapors in your poem. I would suggest if time comes for you to tell the truth, this piece would be a good start to say whats your true feelings. Good Job. |
I really like this one. good work. |