Lost In The Dark

"Swimming into blinding light,
strap in for this long ride.
Find the everlasting twilight;
look beyond for somewhere to hide."

^^I really liked this opening stanza, I enjoyed the emotion here, however I felt that the flow was slightly of on the last line, maybe :

Swimming into blinding light,
strap in for this long ride.
Find the everlasting twilight;
look beyond, a place to hide.

"Show me the way, a path.
Capture the time to choose.
Holding me from death's wrath,
my life you will not underuse."

^^I'm finding this piece to become better and better as I go along, I really liked this stanza, and the flow here is wonderful.

"Love enduring a violent war,
beaten and tired from pains.
Finding that final paramore,
holding up your broken chains."

^^Oh my...what a wonderful way to end this piece! Beautifully written, powerful and moving, and something that sticks with the reader.

I love this.

THanks Danny...but I named it with Jen's suggestion haha.

Providence.

That title I think fits the theme of the poem, and it's a nice word too. :]

Good poem too.