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by The Prince
Providence. That title I think fits the theme of the poem, and it's a nice word too. :] Good poem too.
by Krista
THanks Danny...but I named it with Jen's suggestion haha.
by Jenni Marie
"Swimming into blinding light, strap in for this long ride. Find the everlasting twilight; look beyond for somewhere to hide." ^^I really liked this opening stanza, I enjoyed the emotion here, however I felt that the flow was slightly of on the last line, maybe : Swimming into blinding light, strap in for this long ride. Find the everlasting twilight; look beyond, a place to hide."Show me the way, a path. Capture the time to choose. Holding me from death's wrath, my life you will not underuse." ^^I'm finding this piece to become better and better as I go along, I really liked this stanza, and the flow here is wonderful. "Love enduring a violent war, beaten and tired from pains. Finding that final paramore, holding up your broken chains." ^^Oh my...what a wonderful way to end this piece! Beautifully written, powerful and moving, and something that sticks with the reader. I love this.