All Felt Lost

by CHEMICALcaitlin   Feb 10, 2009


We left everything
we ever knew,
unsure of what's
to come,
in the dark
we left it all,
unsure of what was true.

We built a wall
to break it down,
but still we
would not fall,
We closed our eyes
when all felt lost,
and tried to hide the scars,

our hands were cold,
and we felt lost,
but i could feel the warmth.
we left it all,
we may be wrong,
but time will
tell what's real.

we left it in our cage,
we gave it all away,
Abandoned what was there,
and why do i not care?

We built a wall
to break it down,
but still we would
not fall,
We closed our eyes
when all felt lost,
and tried to hide the scars.

The ending isn't clear,
But we have nothing
left to fear
The sounds may
fade away,
but your voice
will stay the same,

We built a wall
to break it down,
But still we
would not fall,
we closed our eyes
when all felt lost,
and tried to
hide the scars

We built a wall
to break it down,
But still we
would not fall,
we closed our eyes
when all felt lost,
and tried to
hide the scars.

**So, technically not a poem, but a song.**Please rate and comment**

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lyssa

    I love it. :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    The chorus or whatever you want to call it .. Haha i dunno , I don't write songs . But it had a really good flow to it , I really liked it . I wasn't much of a fan of the four lined stanza .. It threw everything off at that point :( .
    We left everything
    we ever knew,
    unsure of what's
    to come, <-
    in the dark
    we left it all,
    unsure of what was true. <-

    I thought it would be really cool if you could make the two lines with the arrows rhyme too .. It would be pretty sweet .

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