You can feel the darkness as you read. I sort of get the feeling when reading "that all is not what is seems to be, hidden behind beautiful veils to fool people to worship and unworthy king. Good job. 5/5

Wow the words were very powerful.. I was trying to soak in every word.. I was really impressed with this piece.. you did a great job the word choice fit the mood perfectly.

5/5.

Powerful dark words here Ingrid! Deep writing you have penned, but an intriging piece of work.
I liked it.