Letting Go.

by Courageous Dreamer   Feb 10, 2009


**This is true, and it's what I'm feeling and everything.. it isnt even comparable to my other poems..I had to get it out.

All she feels is pain as she holds on one last day,
only to torture herself with what can't be anymore.
The tears haven't ended since she last talked to you,
she wants nothing more than a friendship to remain.

Give her a final chance to let her be your friend,
she never once left your side, nor let you down,
although she let go today she will still stay close-
to comfort you when times are bad, she will always care.

Her wet cheeks have words written on them,
read what they speak and you will realize that-
she can't live without you, her best friend,
she genuinely cares SO much about you, she needs you.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Teria

    I liked this poem. I adore poems that are pulled off nicely without using rhyme or what seems to be syllable counts (this doesn't seem, not quite sure though).

    It's a truthful poem that comes from the heart. A lot of times that's all it takes to make a beauty, but this time you've pulled it off w/more than just heartfelt/emotion words.

    Kudos.

  • 15 years ago

    by I Heart Question Mark

    I really liked this poem. I know exactly what you're going through because I am going through the exact same thing right now. It's so difficult. Great job!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This really delivers the heartfelt emotion of frienship i would not change a thing

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Temps,

    One of your previous poems was about this friend too and he told you that you will always have his friendship. He is a man of his word, our TJ and I know him well enough to know he will never let you fall.
    Sometimes a relationship does not work out like we want it to and it hurts so deeply.
    I think you have to take your time to let this wound heal and then you will be able to accept his offer of friendship.

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Tempsy, let me start with the title : letting go. ...

    once , an old chinese wise man told me and i stil hold it in my heart .. in china they say yesterday is history , tomrow is yet to be writen , and today is a GIFT , that is why it is called PRESENT .

    sometimes we live in the past , and forget about today . torturing your self like this , is not going to make things straight or make the clock turn back ..

    you refered your self as SHE in your poem , who is she?
    you or somone you lost in your past ? your words jsut enter the sadenss to my heart, that girl that have such a tender heart and smile .. where is SHE now? .. still see her in your miror?..

    the world is a very cold place tempsy , and he miss your warm smile..

    you wanted one more chance.. to be his friend.. and you did not ask for yourself but to confort him , .. how can somone give soo much? you need to have somethings to give it tempsy , you need to have happiness soo you can offer it .. it wil end up by giving from yourself soo much , that tempsy wont be anymore , even for him ..

    wet cheeks ? i tell you something YOU CAN NOT CRY LOUD ENOUGH SO HIS HEART CAN HEAR YOU ANYMORE .. there voice on a difrent frequency now that his heart can not hear ..

    it si not true that you can not live without him. life dont wait for anyone . it will be painfull yes , and empty yes but it will go onn.. and on... give your scars time to heal , and form .. soo in the future you will look and remember . and read on your heart wall , what battle was held here..

    at last , i tell you we all miss tempsy , and miss her smile and her happy dance and happy face .. and we all wonder when tempsy will be back .. we all await her
    CJ

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