Flood

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Feb 11, 2009


Close my eyes
Don't need to make a sound
This gruesome ugly picture
Painted on the ground
This feeling is so wonde-
I can't feel anymore
Back against the bathtub
Spread out on the floor
This lack of colour
Has so many shades of red
It's not that important
To late to feel not dead
Stop this room from spinning
One more couldn't hurt
Feeling all floods back now
Floods... What Irony in words.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    A great write, play on words that holds a lot of meaning. My favourite line by far is:

    "Floods... What Irony in words."

    An excellent way to end it off. Exceptionally well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by StandStill

    This feeling is so wonde-
    I can't feel anymore

    ^^ i like the cut in words. it makes the reader get it a little better and it shows a definitely human side to the poem. which isn't always there. raw emotion loses a little of human, sometimes. so this one had a good balance. made me feel sick, 'cause i can picture it..

    i love you..

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