Comments : Flood

  • 15 years ago

    by StandStill

    This feeling is so wonde-
    I can't feel anymore

    ^^ i like the cut in words. it makes the reader get it a little better and it shows a definitely human side to the poem. which isn't always there. raw emotion loses a little of human, sometimes. so this one had a good balance. made me feel sick, 'cause i can picture it..

    i love you..

  • 15 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    A great write, play on words that holds a lot of meaning. My favourite line by far is:

    "Floods... What Irony in words."

    An excellent way to end it off. Exceptionally well done.