Comments : Unloving You

  • 15 years ago

    by Nic39uy

    As it turns out, you're not for me
    Although it seems like meant to be
    Though it'd fulfill our fantasy
    Good isn't great, oh, can't you see?

    love this stanza cuz that's how most relationship tend to be then the other just fit hand in hand. we think we are meant to be then in a blink of an eye we're not.

    Perhaps you're not the blind one here
    The one who holds nostalgia
    Love holds me close, it grabs me tight
    Just wishing you were here tonight

    love can surely make one blind indeed and make us do crazy things, but it's something we are want to feel that's why we strive to keep the one we love so much

    Ev'ry story don't end as wished
    With sunsets, clouds and one girl kissed
    And yet I know that lies will end
    Love may be waiting 'round the bend

    ahh so true, not everything is perfect even if she/he is the one there's always a flaw, no such thing as fairytale endings in life. but then again miracles do happen instead. and yup love may be waiting around the bend indeed.

    love the poem, keep it up 5/5