Comments : GRIP

  • 14 years ago

    by DarkCrystalbtrfy

    Very nice use of word play

    My favorite lines were:
    WHATEVER HAPPENS, THE SUN WILL NOT SHINE ON US.
    AND I'LL WALK ALONE WITH THIS DIRTY RUST.
    HOW SHOULD I KNOW IF EVERYONE IS NOT CLEAR?

    I love the image of the rust.

    5/5