So very beautiful, dear Silvia:)

You do these formats with such ease...in my eyes you are the best poetess ever:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Sylvia,

a new form to me and an interesting one in that there is no syllable restriction, just words and their placement.

It is like winter has been described in these words. Snow arrives, so winter begins and then in the second part it then melts symbolising the end of winter. Well that is my interpretation. I am now going to try this..thank you for the inspiration. :)

Take care

Michael

Hi Sylvia this is a different form, your poem gave me a bit of a chuckle when i read it and thought of your message and not being to fond of winter. Well i'm glad you got some sunshine in your life, i've never seen snow before HAHA how strange that must seem to you.
Well written instead of a bone chilling poem this one was heart warming HAHA stay warm

Grant

Snow! Your poem made me want to go play out in the snow, build a snow man and make snow angels, before the sun melted it. unfortunately, there is no snow where i live.. especially at the moment, because its Summer. But your poem really made me want to be around snow.
Really interesting form, that i dont think i have come across before.
Really well done!
5/5