Comments : Arrowed Hearts (Hay(na)ku)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A beautiful Valentine's poem, Michael:)

    Hearts soaring high above...yes that is how it feels when you are in love *smiles*

    Such a stunningly beautiful format this is and so suitable for love poems:)
    This one made me smile...I wish you the best woman ever, my dear friend and for you to be happy eternally:)

    (((hugs)))

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Excellent. Vivid images, I can see two hearts, holding hands, flying off into the sky. Cupid shooting arrows at them. (smile) Good job with the form. 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Vanesa

    Short. Simple. Bold and soft