Awww this is really sweet of you to write a poem for your mom on her birthday. I'm sure she loves it and appreciate the effort that you have put to produce this sweet poem

Excellent Job
5/5

Wow, I really liked this poem and it was kinda ironic because I didn't know you were going to write at the end about your mother like that and it was very nice of you to write a poem for your mother and im sorry about her passing away but I can tell she cared about you and everyone else in your family. =]

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.