Comments : Valentine's Day (hay(na)ku)

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Sylvia,

    oh how I would love to receive such a card with these words.

    Well done

    I hope Valentine's day is a happy one for you.

    Michael

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Dear Silvia,

    This is a real feel good poem!
    I loved it, it would be something that is printed on a real card!

    *hugs dear lady*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Awww with so little words you have captured the essence of Valentines Day. You make Valentine's day sweet as it could be.

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Valenetines day is a beautiful holiday if you have someone to share it with. Your words here were very sweet and reflected a perfect Valentines day indeed.
    With so few words you managed to say all that was needed.
    Awesome work.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    With such few words you really sad what Valentines day was. Nothing to really saw about this one.. you used a interesting form to describe a beautiful holiday.

    :]

    5/5.