by Giegielove Goddess Poet Feb 13, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The sweetness of your smile give me a wonderful feeling |
by kelleyana
I think this poem is great, apart that you need to restructure it a bit. It's a bit repititive and too much 'you' is used, other than that, i get the feeling of what you'd to say to this person, kel. |