Awwwwwwwwww... this is truly sad here. it was beauitfully writen tho. ur emotion n feeling to this happening were right there. i love it.
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
frenchy

A sad, but beautiful poem I would not change a thing. This well written poem touched my heart just as it is written

Wow, so emotional I could really feel the love in this heartfelt write. The structure was good as well as the flow. The imagery for me was fantastic. I can relate to this on so many levels, I recently lost a close friend of mine as well. I enjoyed the read, it put tears in my eyes. Keep up the excellent work!

Peace, Joe

Well it is indeed a sad poem i can feel the longing of having ur friend back. you have painted this poem beautifully.Which gives death a feeling of tranquility. I think the poem ends off perfectly the ur lost ones becomes ur guardian angel. Keep it up

Excellent Job
5/5