You are really someting else! You write this incredible piece down at the spur of the moment, just like that. I loved it, as I love all works that praise our Lord.

Very well done, girlie:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Thank you for your comments. Although I am not religious, I you are talented for your age and this poem feels very pure. I first started out on this site when I was 12, I'm 17 now. Happy writing :)

God has a way to shower us with his grace &
blessings & we must be thanful for each & every one of them..a good read!

I know i surely enjoyed this poem !
this poem was written very well for a spur of the moment thing, and i loved the little rhymes.

"Many times selfish pride has taken control,
Left a shattered heart of mine with tiny holes,
But you willingly patched that quickly up,
Filling moral values into my now overflowing cup. "

that would have to be my favourite stanza.
i loved the metaphor used here, and your choice of words, 'overflowing cup'
oh it was great !

i rate it a 5/5

cindy -

Again, very well done. How many writes out here are "spur of the moment" pieces? Lots. I thank God every day for all that He has given me, and for the beautiful world he made for us. In His praise, I write, and paint, and draw, and wonder. Still, I think you said it all here. Your words pour forth like a wellspring. To bring life to all.