by Allie
Very good choice of words. |
by Weeping Wolf
Strange.....I had a dream like this before. |
by Nix
I like some parts, but I also dislike some parts. I am not sure what I think about this one. It is emotionally powerful. Though I truly don't like your rhyming during this poem. |
I like this poem. You are still writing great and I'm finally making my come back with my poetry...finally. You are still doing great though! :) |