Dance of Love ( ha(na)ku )

by Ingrid   Feb 14, 2009


Dance of Love ( ha(na)ku)

Eyes,
lips meet
Bodies on fire

Dance of love
Such divine
ecstasy

The Hay(na)ku Verse Form, a 21st century poetry form. Invented by poet Eileen Tabios, who is also publisher, Meritage Press. Officially inaugurated on the Web on June 12th, 2003 (Philippine Independence Day). The form spread through the Web to poets all over the world. Eileen Tabios initially called the form "the Pinoy Haiku". Vince Gotera proposed the name "hay(na)ku", and this name has stuck. This corresponds to a Tagalog phrase that means roughly "Oh!" or (in Spanish) "Madre ". The last syllable is pronounced "ko" so maybe the final name will be even more independent of "hayku": "hay(na)ko".

In a traditional Hay(na)ku, there are: A tercet: 3 lines. A total of 6 words: 1 in the first line, 2 in the second line, and 3 in the third line. There is no restriction on syllables or stressed or rhymes.

Variations:

In the 'reverse' haynaku, the longest line is placed first and the shortest last. The total is still 6 words: 3 in the first line, 2 in the second line, and 1 in the third line. Multiple hay(na)ku can be chained to form a longer poem. There are other variations also.

The format for this poem was inspired by my friend Silvia.

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  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    An interesting short poem Ingrid, with such explosiveness in every word used!
    From meeting to making Love in six short lines.
    Well penned!

  • 15 years ago

    by John Long

    Such divine ecstasy indeed. Sublime, blissful.

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    So sensually written with just a few words.. two peoples eyes meet, their lips lock, and the dance of love begins. (:

    Beautiful piece.. after seeing this form used a lot lately by a lot of poets I think its my time to give it a try.

    Well done Ingrid.
    5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Tony

    Such sensuality in so few words. That takes a lot of skill, excellent.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Ingrid,
    Wow, hot, hot! Your Valentines day must have been interesting :] lol.
    Really nice use of the form and it was really well done.
    5/5