Awwww excellent poem as always sweetie. What's the story behind this one?
Need to talk more, miss you xoxo

Good poem, even though I'm not a fan of long poems, this was good. It did seem that you used "I" a lot in your poem. It felt repetitive. I would also like to see longer lines. Express how you feel and what you want to say.
Ah, punctuation. All I saw was periods. Add a comma or semi-colon here and there, and I'll be happy hunky dory.

Good poem overall, but it could use a little tweaking here and there.

Getting over someone is really hard. i have been thru it alot

i like the shortness of the poem and how it speaks to the truth. some lines u have to read in between the lines like

My wrist is isitchy

this line makes me believe tht u have cut and tht its bothering you now. cause u cut because of her but the last stanza

I hate this feeling,
I try to fight it,
I just want to live with out her

means u really do want to get over her.. from my experience cutting didnt help me get over someone.

good poem 5/5

This poem is really good and the rhyme was good and the flow was good as well as the imagery. This poem had really, really good emotion in it and I loved it. This poem really reminded me alot about how I feel.