Fourth of July ( Senryu)

A great Senryu .. I am quite impressed to see all these forms being wrote by you. Each one I read is completely different.. its nice to see you expanding your horizons and exploring forms of poetry. A poem about the 4th of July.. in such few words youve said it all. I love the usage of the word waves.. I believe that would be almost a personification.

Well done.
5/5.

Im going to sound so.. dumb, but whats 4th of July? :] *thinks about holidays..* halloween is in October i think.. so its not Halloween.. haha. Is it thanksgiving? hmm.. i feel sooo dumb right now haha.
Regardless of what it is about, you wrote it very well. :]
5/5

Beautiful piece, you really summed up everything in such few words! The imagery that passed my mind was incredible, as the Fourth of July is a joyous time. 5/5 from me, take care...

~MaryAnne

To me the 4th of July means the summer is almost over, we are at the halfway point of the year. I am not much on the sounds of fireworks but the beauty of the displays they use is wonderful. Good Job. 5/5

Ingrid,

although this is not a celebration in the U.K I can feel the mixed emotion and charged atmoshere in this piece. All this imagery and all in just 17 syllables, how do you do it?

(((hugs))) xx