Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhh!

Now this I like Silvia!
I love all things referring to my favorite activity, ha ha ha!
Beautifully penned and made me think of a lot of things I want to do with the one I love;)

Wtg, dear girlfriend:)

5/5 Ingrid

So much beautiful imagery here, it's also a good example of Miss Takes loop poetry! There is so much to take in here! Loved it, it's a real pleasure to read!

A very sensual write, but you kept it very respectful and i like that. You managed to make it really steamy, but it didnt lose any of its class. Very well done.
I love this form of poetry, ive seen it around a fair bit lately and it amazes me. You used the form really well and it was a great piece.
5/5

Hey Sylvia, this was a beautiful example of a poem of sensual love.
Quite descriptive without going over board, a nice classy poem.
As for the loop poetry i've always liked it, it can be tricky to get it to work though and you've done an excellent job.
Well done

Grant

Very nice & pleasurable! I can feel the love & passion just seeping..a good read! As for the
form it looks easy but at the same time we
have to make sure it all makes sense..good work!

What a wonderfully written poem! A great poetry form that I have yet to see.

You did such a beautiful job making this poem sensual and not making it "too much".. it was beautiful without going over the top..

Your words flowed with one another very well, and the words used were amazing.

Some great alliterations were used within this piece.

"I imagine your sensitive, sensible arms, exquisite"
`Sensitive, sensible arms. almost a tongue twister.. ;]

A great form and an amazing challenge. You pulled it off very nicely. :]

Well done.

5/5.