That is an incredible write and an honorable dedication to what seems as an honorable person. 5/5

I have to admit that i loved this piece the very moment i read it for the contest. This is one the greatest poem i have read on this site and i never visited any other site... :)
Awesome poem.

all the best and take care

I have to admit that i loved this piece the very moment i read it for the contest. This is one the greatest poem i have read on this site and i never visited any other site... :)
Awesome poem.

all the best and take care

The flow and rhyme aren't forced but smooth. Words of wisdom, inspiring and a beautiful dedication. I love how there is a lesson to be learned which is explained in the last stanza. Excellent job!

Outstanding write kay, tributes people write of their loved ones who touched their lives are always among my favorites. 5/5 all the best wishes

I'm always wary about rhyming poetry, but you pulled it off, it was a very well penned poem, and none of the rhymes seemed forced. An excellent tale with a thought provoking couplet at the end. Very mature and contained a very nice flow.

Well done.

Kay - this is great! Very visual - filled with detail in a few words. A very loving piece in honor of a fine gentleman, I've no doubt.

This is a good poem. nice and free flowing. good work.

Hey, i really love this work, i love it!

Wow I did not go an see what others have written so I would not be influenced by what has already been said. I have to say that I think this is one of the best poems I have seen here and I really feel that the words you chose were excellant and the thoughts even better. I could tell where it was going before I got there but I let the slow current of your poem take me in and push me along while enjoying each and every line. Bravo on a work that shows the talent that always flows from you heart and your pen. excellant work Daisy.. very excellant indeed.