This poem is so incredibly sweet... I am amazed :)

*rock on* ;)

isabel

Great piece of poetry, I truly enjoyed:)
You got across the deep emotions you feel when two lovers meet, really nice!

Welcome to our club:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Wow so passionate and breath takeing.

good write.

Very well written I cannot find a thing to criticize here The sensual wording stirs much passion

well done

Loved it =] The chioce of wording was beautiful and the flow was perfect. I really enjoyed this poem you captivated me with your descriptions so a def. 5/5