by Amber Feb 16, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
My strength is fading fast, Disappearing with ever salty tear. |
Wow this was a very strong an emotional piece...I liked it quite a lot actually and I wish that I could say how much this piece made me feel but I am limited on time..sadly...So i will say something short and sweet. |
Wow |
by HvN
Great ryme, each line has a decent flow, the s tory and sadness potrayed is clearly visible within each line and word you wrote. |