Back to Reality

by Kayl   Feb 16, 2009


Thought i was stronger,
thought it wouldn't happen again.
Didn't want to hurt any longer,
i had forgotten your heart's made of tin.

Perfect weekend of me and you,
romance and love in the air.
Kisses and Hugs, just us two,
Didn't think I'd feel so bare.

I had thought this was over,
didn't think you could do it.
Had to go undercover,
had to see her, just for a bit.

You tried to cover it up,
saying it didn't mean anything.
I want to give up,
i hate feeling this sting.

I hate this part right here,
Was hoping for that possibility.
but i feel that knowing tear,
Its back to reality.

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Can't believe i let it happen again.

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  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    Very good. The rhyming seemed a little forced in many stanzas, which affected the flow, but the emotions were very strong. Your writing really seems to be coming from the heart, so it's hard to be picky when it comes to the little things, but you can only get better. Another thing I really liked about your writing is that you give the reader something to think about. "Did what, again"? Fantastic job, 4/5.

    -mandy :)

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