Very good. The rhyming seemed a little forced in many stanzas, which affected the flow, but the emotions were very strong. Your writing really seems to be coming from the heart, so it's hard to be picky when it comes to the little things, but you can only get better. Another thing I really liked about your writing is that you give the reader something to think about. "Did what, again"? Fantastic job, 4/5.

-mandy :)