This is a unique style and I like it |
Very well-written and wonderfully expressed emotions of how you would do anything for your love. Reminds me exactly of the song "To Be With You" by David Archuleta. A real treasure to read upon, 5/5 from me. Take care! |
by The Prince
A short and sweet write from you, an honest confession, with a continuous rhyme that compliments the sentiments. |
Your poem certainly put a smile on my face. I felt the love. <3 |
by Sylvia
A declaration of undying love for someone and they would indeed by a very fortunate person to have a love that true. Good job. 5/5 |
Just came to send a message, and what do I see? A poem that I'd heard of before. I then twigged that it was my name (I can be a bit slow sometimes!) So I thought I might as well take a peek at it anyways :D |
by umbra
Not my favorite of your poems. It conveys a strong emotion and has a good rhyme scheme. What makes it endearing is the thought one might remake the stars themselves to be with the one they love. ^^ |
by Jordan W
To Be With You, |