Hey.i know what you mean..i just got broke up with by my boyfriend...and it wasnt a very pleasant time..but this is still pretty good :)

I understood the emotions going through it but it does need a lil help ill give it a 4

You have a note at the bottom saying that you know it is not good; but with the emotion you put into it, it is much better than good.

"I have never hurt you...
i have never broken your heart...
so why must you do this to
me,, why did this have to start?"
^^this was the best stanza of the whole poem. you really do a fantastic job with the intro in all of your work.

"you took my heart out of my chest
ripped it into two...
now that your gone what shall i do??
should i cry should
be happy that your not here to hurt me anymore?"
^^third line, try this: 'Now that you are gone, what shall I do?' also, this stanza sort of got out of whack. umm. for the 4th line: maybe you should bring the second 'should' down to the 5th like and instert an 'I' afterwards.

"all i can think about is how much i loved
you and now im lost in my own body...
why did you leave me... why did you lie
you said that you loved me..."
^^the 'you' in the second line should be brought up to the first line

"but i guess you loved her not I..."
^^insert a comma after her, to add a dramatic pause

Overall not that bad of a poem like you think. True poetry is just expression, and you did a great job of expressing your feelings in this one. So I gave it a 4/5.