by The Prince
Wow, this was so direct and lovely, and sweet! You didn't beat around the bush or anything, and I wont pull it apart and anaylse it because it all works as one big piece. I like how you've used the form, it's disjointed and it works that way. I don't rate poems, just comment but I loved this, excellent work lovely. |
by Faithless
Well Skye I skye i love what you have written here. I like the idea that the poem is sort of like a confession. using just simple words to express ur emotions, I can feel how deeply in love u are with this person. Well it was a delightful to read this poem Keep it up |
by Jenni Marie
"Looking at you |