I just love your writing! I feel your poetry whole-heartedly. The way in which you convey your message so elegantly, yet raw with unlimited emotions is quite moving . The first stanza is my absolute favorite, just flawless. The second one flowed very nicely and stayed true to the theme. The last was fabulous, love the ending.

Awesome work!

I love this a lot. Every stanza is simply amazing, and flawless to me. The metaphors that you used are breathtaking.
I really like your ideas within poetry which connect with mythology in some way, and you used Pandora's box here as a metaphor greatly, without submitting to cliches.
The choice of words is astonishing from the beginning to the end, along with the imagery that you created- such intricate and vivid descriptions in every stanza left me speechless.
The meaning behind this poem is heartfelt, and I can deeply relate to your words.

- Neurotic how cyclones
embrace your elegance.
Twirling a dance of
shallow deceit.-
^^^
Wonderful beginning which pulls the reader deeply into the piece. I like how creative and intelligently written it is, so original. Simply captivating.

Beside the beginning lines, the second stanza is my favorite, it's amazing in so many ways.
I know I'm repeating myself here, but you know how much I adore your work. This piece is just one in a row of my favorites from you.