Comments : My unending solitude

  • 15 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    I like this lines....

    (A poem spurs from the heart,
    Rhythm breaks its ties with rhyme.
    Mind slips into the uniformity, momentarily,
    When a moment breaks its ties with time.

    Sometimes I feel and that is true,
    I enjoy being alone like a dew.
    That stands quietly on the top,
    Of the edge of petal like a drop.)

    stanza.......

    a poem spurs from the heart.....wow i wish i could imagine that...
    overall 5/5 seriously!!!!!!! no regreats giving u 5/5 for this one.