Comments : Everyone but me.

  • 15 years ago

    by Brenden

    I really feel like i can relate to this piece i had an ex and all she did waste tell lies. Is that one of the reasons you used webs, as to say you were trapped in a web of lies? anyways I thought this poem was written really well.

    The lies were so regular for you, so normal.
    Everyone, everyone but me knew.
    I didn't know you never told me the truth.

    This stanza was my favorite because it seems when someone is in that situation nobody wants to speak up an say something. Very good use of words, i enjoyed the read!
    brenden

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Is this supossed to be a song. It seems fly. I enjoyed it very much just cause i can relate to it in some way. well keep it up and I'll keep reading. 5/5 on the poem, and ttyl.