by Kelsy Feb 19, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Smoke encircles every memory I have |
by The Prince
A sensual love poem that's a delight to read, with good use of repetition and great wording. Usually I find repetition annoying but in this case it was cleverly used, and I enjoyed reading. |
by Jackie
An excellent poem, very well worded and loved the way it flowed. 5/5 |