Hey Ingrid, this was to me a very sexy and sensual poem, although it could even in part be read as a life poem.
I still find it amazing how so much can be said in so few words
Well done

Grant

Few words, powerful message, hidden meaning, good form, excellent write. Good Job. 5/5

Cinquains are soo much fun to write, arent they? You put together a great one here.. syllable count looks to be correct.. I agree with TJ on this one, everything was placed perfectly.

5/5. :]

Whoah! though this piece of art is obviously short, it still consisted all the meaning you want to portrait. great imagination, the form didn't mess the flow and it's just simple sensual and sweet

Great Work!

=5/5=

Hmm.. i think the third line has 7 syllables instead of 6.. but yea great job.

I like this short poem Ingrid.
Love the line 'augmenting our love with each turn'
Nice work! Another short poem that says a lot.