Invisible

by timmy   Feb 20, 2009


Everyday I always tried my best
Just to hope you'd notice me here
Singing melodies through-out the air
Hoping you'd listen with your ear

The rhythm of my heart just as a metronome
Harmonizing along with my words of fear
Scared of the truth, i already knew the answer
Dropping to my knees in a dark despair

The shadows engulfed; making me feel bare
Listless was everything drawing ever near
Silhouettes of life in irises that dripped tears
Pulses in a dreamy air deluding all cares

As the stars glittered in a field of darkness
Insignificant beats of my heart so dear
Slowly fading into a silence that lingered in the air
I knew my flaw was being invisible;though no one cared

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  • 11 years ago

    by Alessandra

    This is wonderful. I love this. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Alessandra

    This is wonderful. I love this. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    I like this poem for many reasons. 1) your description. Its very good and i can get a clear image in my head as i read it. 2) your rhyming. words that i didnt think fit well together seem to do so in this piece. 3) the flow. its like im reading a river of words*if that makes any sense*

    A job well done with this piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jessica

    Very awesome poem :) .

  • 12 years ago

    by Jollin

    "Everyday I always tried my best
    Just to hope you'd notice me here"

    hmmm..... i can relate to this.

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