I'll tell you what timmy, the only one that will forever care is God...and I'm not the religious to figure that out, but great work, better then mines :)

Who knew that a rejection could be so poetic? well done!
~Ben

I care babe i care:)
love the poem. Thats from the heart.

As the stars glittered in a field of darkness
Insignificant beats of my heart so dear
Slowly fading into a silence that lingered in the air
I knew my flaw was being invisible;though no one cared
Thats my favourite part it reminds me of myself to be fair 5/5 xxxxxxxxxxxx

Its a very good poem i like it very much!, i can even relate to it, if you need anything let me know =) ill help you
c/b Loka

I like this a whole lot...
and there has to be someone who cares about you babe.
if not, i will =d
good write tho<333
i loves it [=

Hey this is awesome! I can really relate on it... I think I have just been inspired :D

Great job!

"As the stars glittered in a field of darkness
Insignificant beats of my heart so dear
Slowly fading into a silence that lingered in the air
I knew my flaw was being invisible;though no one cared"

Amazing, you've achived a great skill in rhyming my friend!

Wow...this is one of my favorites from you. vivid and flawless. great work!!!

victoria

I loved it, you write amazingly

5/5

Ahw, I Adored This Poem.
You Have Some Great Talent, I Envy It.
Make's My Poems Look Rubish:P Haha.
I Love your Style Of Writing, And How you Just Say All That you Need To Say.
And Also A Very Nice Flow=D
5/5
Can You Comment And Rate One Of My Poems Too? That Would Be Great!
Much Love, Jessi<3

I liked this one a lot. Lots of people are in the same boat as you... (it gets better with time) beautiful poem bud :)

Great job. This piece is awesome.

I love this poem :]

Bitter be the hurtfull morn if none of the nights promise remained within a fiery fuss the earth to scorn.

"Everyday I always tried my best
Just to hope you'd notice me here"

hmmm..... i can relate to this.

Very awesome poem :) .

I like this poem for many reasons. 1) your description. Its very good and i can get a clear image in my head as i read it. 2) your rhyming. words that i didnt think fit well together seem to do so in this piece. 3) the flow. its like im reading a river of words*if that makes any sense*

A job well done with this piece.

This is wonderful. I love this. :)

This is wonderful. I love this. :)