by kelleyana Feb 20, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Comes in different shape and size, |
Wonderful Write!!! |
by Faithless
Kel, you juz make me crave for chocolates right now...You just make it sound so delicious and tempting.I like that you just let the words flow out to the comfort of the readers tongue. |
by Shinobi
You expressed the sensation of choclate in a very detailed way. I find it a little hard to call this piece a poem. The first stanza had short lines and a few rhymings here and there, but the other stanzas had long lines with a little poetic context. |
This is one of the few poems I have read to stimulate the taste buds |
MMM CHOCOLATE!!! Great Write, Much Enjoyed!!! |