Timmy your amazing at writing i really like it <333
5/5

Thats great... so sad... makes me feel so sad inside... omfg
lolz
great work
keep going!!
peace
Margii
xx

Incredible, i love it...great job Timmy

I love how u use the symbolism of the flower.

Just lay in your sanctuary which you thought was home
It's just a fray of everything I've ever known

nice lines... n nice poems!

Nice poem, it was so sad but very descriptive and lovely :) Keep writing

Nice write - good words and perfectly placed. I think I would have left off the last line. It seemed to end without any problems just before that last line. keep up the good works.

This is really amazin.! nice flow of words.! wow i love how descriptive it is.!
5/5

-Tania:)

That was beautiful yet just so sad. The flow and description just kept the whole peice together and it really made a sad poem into something really beautiful.
Great job.

This is such a beautiful poem! I loved your word structure and your overall passion you showed for this poem. Great job!

Timmy,
I wish I could of been the one for you, but it just never seem to happen. You are my bestfriend and you always will be. But, I'm afraid I can't be anything more than just a friend. I am sorry that I am doing this to you, but I just have to. So the flower does cry too. And it cries for you. I love you Timmy! Never forget that.

Love,
Nikki

Amazing! Wow you're great!

Very talented indeed keep it up 5/5

I loved it... It was so full of emotion and how you used a flower as the symbol is amazing. Way to go! :)

5/5

Awww that is really sad but very beautiful.....i think it is amazing....wonderful work...keep writing....5/5

Wow. This piece is amazing. The imagery and descriptions are beautiful. I love this!! There is a wonderful word choice which forms a terrific flow.

On the other hand however, I am sorry you feel/felt this way

I love this(:

The pain & sadness you feel is obvious as nothing helps. It flowed perfectly.
great job
5/5

I like this poem (: Its funny because I wrote one similar. Its called "The Flower" you should check it out. I liked the description and it had a very unique rhythum I enjoyed this very much (:

My gosh this piece is amazing. You have done a fantastic job, because the emotion is all there, as is imagery. Fantastic job.

That was beautiful i love it!!
keep up the good work!!! rtf?

<Katie