Loved this poem. Keep up the great work hun never stop writing. Trust me u will never feel the same when u do.

That's an amazing poem, but you have one grammatical . You wrote "pedals," instead of "petals." Pedals are on a bicycle; petals are on flowers.

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-Heather

Amazing poem :)

Wow great one i liked it

Just lay in your sanctuary which you thought was home
It's just a fray of everything I've ever known .....a tip top piece keep up 5/5