Great poem with intrigue and imagery

The sun is lie
The sun is a lie?
nonetheless a very deep paradox
well wtritten

Yes, the sun is a lie.
It's a false sense of hope.
Thanks for the comments.

Very imaginie indeed. flow was good as well. and in some parts you lost me but once i read them again i renot lost myself XD
4/5 for me
nicely done.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy