Nice write, the flow was flawless as well as the structure. You really painted a picture in my head with the vivid imagery you portrayed in this poem. Well written, keep up the good work!

Peace, Joe

I sadly know from experience that abuse leads to abuse and this poem is very well writtten and has moved me

She wants to have true happiness, she wants to start new
Nobody will help her because nobody knows she is blue
She has shut out the world she now cries glass tears
Broken glass surrounds her, things become quite clear

It breaks my heart to know how hard it is to end the chain reation of abuse when the abuse has theirself as the worst enemy, and this poem needs to be read

Wow i agree it does put a picture in your mind..
its written very good..
i know the feeling
keep it up..

Aveena.

Amazing is the only thing i have to say!! 5/5

This poem is great. It is real in a sense you can feel. It sums up many people's lives in a few short lines, in a good way. Keep writing, you've got talent.

Well i must confess this was not what i was expecting, this was well written, the subject was interesting and the poem was well told.
You kept me interested throughout, all in all very well done.

Grant

Excellent write 5/5