This is my fav. of yours I LOVE IT

Very simple and scattered, not necessarily a bad thing... To put it bluntly, I didn't catch what you're trying to say here. First stanza, are the answers supposed to be yes, or no? It's a mix of the two... And second stanza, you aren't exactly following the same pattern as before, creating confusion for the reader. And the third stanza was a little random, but the last line sounds like you're focusing on the soldiers with [wars].

That was very beautiful. A lot of emotion is flying around, but I really liked. It's like jumping in a freezing river and feeling the cold rush around you. Great job, 5/5.