Comments : On A Typical Wintery Day

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wowweeee! this was different. It made me picture something spooky, but loving. So a great combination there. Im not sure if thats how you intended it, but thats what i got from it :]
    It was original. i liked it a lot.
    I like the idea of Tangled hearts, i think thats cool. :]
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    'Tinkles of raindrops creped through the window
    Making their way into the cordially heated room'

    Did you mean to spell 'creeped' here? :)
    Excellent introduction here, I liked how the poem held a dark/mysterious atmosphere. There's some great use of language here. You didnt rhyme, which was good, that would have ruined the poem in my opinion. Try not to overburden your poems with too much description though.

    Great work