Love's Paradox (Collab with Michael D Nalley)

Joe
what a beautiful job on your collab.....these are hard to pull off and the 2 of you did it so wonderfully. Your words meshed so beautiful togeter. The flow and the imagery are awesome.

"Fiction and fact
it's not far apart,
in the abstract
of a poets heart."

Love the ending.
Excellent job to you both!
~Clapping~
Take Care
Cindy

Very brief, yet beautiful. I love the flow and rhyming. It was done with ease and yet each stanza is filled with so much meaning. It is a very sweet message...yet I was able to find the bitterness of it all. I really enjoyed reading this and I feel I can take something new away from it each time I read it. Nice. 5/5.

-Rolo

My soul exalted,
humbly a lover mourns.
Pain is not halted,
by a crown of thorns.

^This was my favorite stanza.

You have both done an excellent job with this piece, it was a very enjoyable read. I also thought the ending was a nice touch. Great job.

A beautiful combination of talents.....flows well and has great rhythm and rhyme....

"Fiction and fact
it's not far apart,
in the abstract
of a poets heart."

^ Love this ending...beautiful! Congrats To you both on a lovely piece.

OMG! I love this poem. It was very well written. And absolutly amazing. It flows naturally, and beautifully. I hope that one day I can accomplish this. It's as if I could hear you telling me the words. I could feel it. I know that kind of sounds cheesy, but who cares? You two did an amazing job. This is, by far, one of the best poems I have ever read. Great job, guys! But I do have to know. What does zyzygy mean?

=5/5=
Amazing!
~Bella<3